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Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:55 am
StupidSoup says...



Lucifer :D that's a lovely name!

Anywho ima read da posts now!
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Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:51 am
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



After you've drank the potion, about 7 hours...
Former incarnations have been:
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Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:59 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@15253 ...Soooooooo, that other person is Lamia? 'Cause I believe she's the only one who has cards in this SB.
Again, just like with Avalon, just wanted to make sure, as you didn't describe the other person.
...Lamia's waiting in another room, though, and Kiira's with Dante, so... I'm kinda confused here.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Sat Apr 18, 2015 11:28 am
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BrumalHunter says...



I'm still here! I'm currently doing what my character is doing: staying in the background. (Blame [i]The Magic Flute[/u], the UCT Maths Olympiad, my Physics, Maths and Biology teachers, and our national electricity provider who has decided to resume their loadshedding after months of stability.) Nevertheless, I shall try to make my post sometime during this weekend, because if I don't, it will probably be delayed until next weekend...
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:28 pm
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StupidSoup says...



o-o no....no I checked that....no...NO..NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

am soz am fix naow are bad wif sifting through infoz thnx you fer chekin that twaggy .3.
I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine


Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


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Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:32 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



It seems there have been some misconceptions on who is where and what's going on xD

Oh, and at this point, everyone has been mentioned once at least somewhere, correct?
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Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:40 pm
StupidSoup says...



can I just...like, keep it the way it is ~;3;~ ?

I dun wann change da tingz

(I will do so though)

EDIT: Edited, soooo many tense change errors but im to lazy. No more Kiira in the kitchen (hehe that rhymes) so job=done
I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine


Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


I was once Numbers

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Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:37 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I'm not sure about Brand, but I'll address that when I get to writing my post, @Wolfare1.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2015 4:24 am
AndrewRayne says...



Want to post but I'm confused. Isn't Kiira with me and Rydia?

Just gonna post it as if you didn't notice us and she just walked in I guess haha. And I also think yu have the wrong girl too lol. Lamia is the one who does the card thing and she's still in the parlor lol. So... Gonna just say ya walked up out of no where. Let me know if you need me to change it lol.
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Mon Apr 20, 2015 5:07 am
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Err, I did make the change that says Kiira is not with Lamia. Vinn and Lamia are both in the kitchen while Kiira and u and Rydia are in just entering. I guess if you made a slight tweak to show us talking before you come in that would smooth things out.
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Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


I was once Numbers

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Mon Apr 20, 2015 8:25 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



But why is Lamia is in the kitchen? My post specified that she was waiting in the dinning room. With all the glass chairs, glass table, etc.
And she considers her cards godly (I.e. Character description). Why does she randomly enter the kitchen without noticing Vinny and pull out her cards out again?
Yeah, still confused here. If you made the effort to remove Kiira, do remove Lamia as well, please.
Last edited by TinkerTwaggy on Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2015 11:08 am
AndrewRayne says...



Yeah thats what I thought. Lamia is still in the parlor lol. Thats why I focused on only puting Kiira there since she is also the only one wearing a Kimono lol.
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Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:46 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Sorry, not the parlour, I meant the Dinning Room. That's what I described as the place with all the glass stuff. I'll edit that.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2015 2:27 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



For the love of all that is good an kind, would somebody please make a list detailing where all the characters are? (All the characters that have been mentioned thus far, that is - the characters who have yet to feature in a post, like Brand, are still in the Parlour.)
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2015 8:59 pm
AndrewRayne says...



Dante. Kira, and Lamia are with Vinny in the Kitchen. :)
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