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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:34 am
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@LordZeus - Good idea! I'll see if I can incorporate that into my post. My plan for now is Grin is going to confront Anita directly about Ebony, feel totally intimidated by the both of them, and leave emptyhanded. I'm going for a bit of comic relief here. :P Since she's seen their faces now, they don't stand a chance going back for Ebony later - then Grin could try to hire Erik to get it for them. :)
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 6:00 am
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@Kelpies Nice post! I take it that we'll be going with the version that was not kidnapped? Unless I simply misinterpreted from the beginning the amount of time she would have spent with the Sith.... Either way, really like the post and can't wait for the post I can write when the two encounter.

On another note, everyone; I'm dying to write up a post for Derryn, and I can certainly do without a potential customer, just want to put out the invitation! If anyone has need for a bounty hunter, let me know and I'll work it in! Peace :)
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 8:09 am
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@Allisonthewriter by the way Ro's half siblings woukd be Erik's too! That mean Erik also has a large family that he never knew about :D

just one little doubt I had: @TheFantasy14 if Ro's mother (who was sith) was also Mourdica's mother, then how would Ciro be jedi? If that relationship stands, then wouldn't Ciro have also become Sith? I don't get it could you please clear that up for me?
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 12:59 pm
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@WalkerForest1066 I still want Anita to be kidnapped, but not yet.
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 1:01 pm
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Trying to write, still. Ugh. I can't wait for more action and drama, cause that's easy to write XD
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 1:12 pm
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@TheFantasy14 I was wondering if it woukd be okay with you if Mourdica were to later become Erik's love interest. That is, if they aren't related (as you haven't yet confirmed that...or did you?)

@Allisonthewriter by the way, although Erik and Ro don't know that they share a parent yet, I think that they would develop a figurative sibling relatiinshio in the meantime, since Erik already feels protective towards Ro. What do you think?
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 1:56 pm
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@LordZeus I think the figurative sibling relationship would be great!

@Kelpies, I just published that short Grin post. Please let me know if any changes should be made - I keep drafting these up late at night, and edit them the next day when I have a break.

I'm going to leave the next development in Ro's story to LZ and Erik. :)

By the way, I highly recommend listening to the Star Wars soundtracks while writing in here. It's amazing - John Williams' music has so many layers to it, my ears pick up something new, a subtle melody intertwined within the music, every time I listen!
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:02 pm
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I will try to start working on another Lamar post soon. If I bust my butt, I might be able to get it up before I leave for vacation...
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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:04 pm
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@Allisonthewriter is it alright with you if I write the part where they get the cat? or do you wanna write that?
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:30 pm
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I think I'd like to start it off, but I'll leave ample space for you to continue it. :)

@Kelpies, what do you think of Anita getting kidnapped and Ebony being left in the Fidsmor's hands? (Like, if the cat-napping mission results in finding Ebony alone on Anita's ship, tranquilized, and Anita missing?) Then, Grin feels bad about handing Ebony over to his smuggling contact, and they try to rescue Anita, which brings them all closer to the Legion?
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:38 pm
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@Allisonthewriter Okay then. Just let me post first then please before you post again, I want to have Erik show Ro what he's building in his workshop before anything else happens (Please don't get your hopes up about it being anything super awesome, but I'd like to post about that first please)
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:42 pm
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@LordZeus, Sure! While they're in the workshop, would Ro be allowed to bring back some scrap parts - perhaps in return for her hard work - for herself? She's building a lightsaber gauntlet thingie, which is something I'm hoping to write about as soon as she goes back to the Jade Star.
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:46 pm
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LordZeus says...



Sure @Alisonthewriter ! I'll write that into my post :D
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:52 pm
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Awesome! Oh, and @Caterpickle, I can't wait to read what happens to Lamar!
  





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Thu Feb 11, 2016 4:14 pm
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SkyeWalker says...



Okay, I might just post now, because I don't want to badly characterize Zarash, so @WalkerForest1066, You can write the next bit. This post will be so shoooort.
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