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and move the story along with my character.
AlmondEyes wrote:@EloquentDragon, You misunderstand my meaning. What I mean when I say that is I have no idea what's supposed to happen next evolving my character or anyone else's. I'm not relying on anyone to "push my character around" so don't assume that's what i'm doing.
Avalon wrote:AlmondEyes wrote:@EloquentDragon, You misunderstand my meaning. What I mean when I say that is I have no idea what's supposed to happen next evolving my character or anyone else's. I'm not relying on anyone to "push my character around" so don't assume that's what i'm doing.
See here's the problem, THINK, you have Akiza in such a way that she could act as the Secondary Antagonist @EloquentDragon was talking about. Problem is you have her to romantically interested to do so, all you care about is having her interact with @AdventurerDaniel character.
You could have her get ambitious and want to take over the club; by having her use her ability to create doubt in peoples minds about Andrea's leadership of the club. Saying she hates Andrea simply because she's an authority figure is lame and unrealistic in my opinion.
AlmondEyes wrote:I do believe we talked about why Akiza doesn't trust Andrea, and if you don't remember, then that would be your problem, and as for her distrust of Men, don't you think she would be able to work move past what happened to her and know how to tell when and when not to trust, even if she wasn't an Empath? Hell, even some women who haven't been assaulted sometimes have a heavy distrust of Men.
AlmondEyes wrote:I didn't know we were bickering, and you're the one who brought up the whole romance thing in the first place, but you're the one who can't make up his mind whether to stay or go, so maybe you should take your own advice.
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