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Holy guacamole, @JamesHunt! That post is, possibly, your best yet, adding an incredibly unique flavor to this Storybook! Nice job on that little cage map, too; it's very helpful.

Wolfie36 wrote:Holy guacamole, @JamesHunt! That post is, possibly, your best yet, adding an incredibly unique flavor to this Storybook! Nice job on that little cage map, too; it's very helpful.

Aww, you flatter me... Nevertheless, I am glad the diagram helped.

@JamesHunt, Thoren doesn't seem to agree with your assessment of him.

I have a question. Does anyone have an idea of how we are supposed to get out of the prison? I think that since @JamesHunt sort of got us all into this mess it might be good if he proposed how we are to get out of it.

As things stand right now according to James' post none of the other dragons can get out of the cell and even though Ghost could, he would be put right back in it by the dwarves since Ghost is not very powerful physically perhaps one of @Cynder's characters who also have Psycic powers could escape? They are both more powerful physically than Ghost is. Other than that I hav no other ideas. What do the rest of you have to say?

What about @dragonthief1's character Jura? I know dragonthief isn't really here anymore, but he/she provided us with a powerful character.

He considers most other creatures except Dragons, to be inferior to him and his kind. This makes him ept to get in fights with other creatures, which he will most likley win, but it doesnt help in creating friends.

This indicates that he would be willing to help the dragons and fight the dwarves, or at least distract them while the others escape.

Ah, that makes sense!

I have one more question. It was never really made clear whether all dragons can communicate with each other using their minds or not?

I may be struggling to stay half alive, but I'm still here, promise. Of course the Pheonix could contribute to escape as well, since we've concluded she wasn't captured. Maybe bring back up?

How about if everyone has their own escape plan, and for some reason, they all try their methods at the same time, and somehow succeed? Because Kirimbi has her plan, and I know a few others do too...

r4p17 wrote::P @JamesHunt, Thoren doesn't seem to agree with your assessment of him.

Oh, terribly sorry. PM/IM me the correct details or post them here, and I shall correct them. My knowledge of auras and chakras are elementary, so I simply wrote about them in a simple way.

Kelpies wrote:How about if everyone has their own escape plan, and for some reason, they all try their methods at the same time, and somehow succeed? Because Kirimbi has her plan, and I know a few others do too...

Wolfare1 wrote:I may be struggling to stay half alive, but I'm still here, promise. Of course the Pheonix could contribute to escape as well, since we've concluded she wasn't captured. Maybe bring back up?

Wolfie36 wrote:What about @dragonthief1's character Jura? I know dragonthief isn't really here anymore, but he/she provided us with a powerful character.

He considers most other creatures except Dragons, to be inferior to him and his kind. This makes him ept to get in fights with other creatures, which he will most likley win, but it doesnt help in creating friends.

This indicates that he would be willing to help the dragons and fight the dwarves, or at least distract them while the others escape.

All of the above would make for spectacular chaos. @r4p17, you are right, I (Ghost) did cause this whole mess, so I shall definitely suggest solutions; here is one:
If dragons can read each others' thoughts, then I agree with r4 that each should also have the ability to communicate telepathically, if only to a certain extent, so the dragons can then plan their escape together; if not, then Cynder and Ghost can individually inform the other dragons of their plan. The duo then can combine their abilities to break themselves and as many other dragons as possible out, coming back for the rest later, e.g. after finding the keys to the remaining cells.
Kirimbi can escape on her own, so she can join them. One less dragon to free.
Crystal can unknowingly aid this plan by creating a diversion, which gives the dragons the opportunity they need to do what they must in order to free their companions and the other captives. The fact that Cynder has a puppet helps.
Finally, when all seems lost, Jura can arrive and save the day - a dragon as powerful as he can surely sense such a high concentration of dragons, no matter how much titanium the mountain contains.

Shall I come up with another suggestion? Anyone else have an idea? (We'd love to hear it!)

Your assessment was correct, but Thoren does't think that he makes decisions too quickly. In other words he doesn't know his own weakness.

Otherwise, I think that your plan for escape is solid

Kirimbi's plan wasn't that good though... She was going to blow up the prison or electricute the guards or something with magic. But the pearl's magic is waning...

Oh and JamesHunt? Can you add in your quick scan of Kirimbi that she seems quite troubled?

Because my idea for the pearl was that she was spilling her life energy into the pearl to keep her ancestors alive within it...

No problem, @Kelpies.

EDIT: Included.

Thanks!

So, I agree with what @JamesHunt says and when I post I'll add something of a rebellion within the dwarves themselves. This should allow for Crystal to make her diversion and every dragon can then escape. Technically, dragons have to look into each others eyes to speak telepathically(that's not fact I just put that in to lessen my characters power) but I think we can move beyond that. Does the titanium affect telepathy or mind control? Or can that be avoided? And the chart was very helpful, thanks xP And that is it I believe..

Great job everyone with the storybook and welcome back @Wolfare1

@TheWanderingWizard had brought up the part about the dragons being captured and incarcerated by the dwarves, so I simply added what I thought would contribute to that. As for the titanium, it only weakens the dragons if they try to break past them - psychic powers such as Telepathy, Telekinesis and Mind-Control are not affected by the bars. However, if a dragon had enough strength, they could break the masonry above and below the bars, causing the bars to fall down and allowing them to escape.