Young Writers Society

Alright.

@KatyaElefant

Your nun is great. HOWEVER, I'd like you change her method of death (it's just too close to my own character, and both of them are so rare that it's just odd- maybe kill her off from exposure?). Second, I'd like to point out that she doesn't need to create a dress from what she's wearing- they each get fully stocked closets with whatever clothes they want to wear.

List of the original Nine Circles of Hell, each Circle should be as it's name says. Now with fixes due to some errors I made in the previous list, if anyone has questions you may contact me as why I put your character in that Circle and I will gladly answer as so.

Limbo: None
Lust: Brand Ashling, Gustevin Holstinak
Gluttony: Gustevin Holstinak
Greed: Jack
Anger: Kiira, Ida Le Clerc, Gustevin Holstinak
Heresy: Vinny
Violence, split into three rounds.
Round 1, Murder: Jack, Kiira, Lamia, Gustevin, Elarie, Reina, Dante, Phillip, Brand, Vinny, Ida Le Clerc
Round 2, Suicide: Elarie, Dante, Phillip,
Round 3, Against God:
Fraud: Jack, Brand, Vinny
Treachery: Elarie, Ida Le Clerc, Kiira, Reina

I will make another list soon under @QueenAnne's form of Hell that will give an idea where each character belongs. Also, fun fact: I think everyone in the SB is a murderer in some form or another.

@Avalon Wouldn't Ida be against God?

Note to @Avalon, Gus (Gustevin) is also lustful, and he expresses anger and hatred towards his uncles, so please add him to those areas. Thank you.

@KatyaElefant

Nope as Violence Against God is defined as any form of attack on God that would harm the economy, those who perform Sodomy (Anal Sex) or are blasphemers in anyway, which you can argue anyone from the 1900's and onwards can be put into Violence Against God since most of us these days take the Lords name in vain and or have crosses or holy water or to talk about anything sacred.

@TheWanderingWizard, done

Okay! Thanks for the clarification!

Posted!

May I go next?

Also, I shall follow everyone here since it provides a much easier way to communicate (suffice it to say, I'm to lazy to scroll through the who's online page)

Whoever gets their post up the fastest can post next.
No specific order.

@Avalon You might still want to add Lamia in heresy though, because, yes, she based her own personal version of the religion she grew up with on what she's be taught (more details on that as the story progresses), but that also means that she disregards/alters everything related to it.
That unfortunately includes The God, which, in a monotheist view, is a form of heresy. Or so I've been told.
@QueenAnne Oh, we don't have a specific order. Nice, this means that we still get to adapt to each other Perfect.

Twaggy, I'll tell everyone the order when the characters seem to be ready to get out. I'll also give people a description of the punishment.

Oh! Okay then. No order for now, but it's coming. Oh well.

I'll be posting tonight.

@Avalon the gleam in the eye part leads me to believe that the woman who spoke there was Lamia (that and the sarcastic comment), but as you described the unamed woman wearing a "business attire", I'm confused.
Who was that? I just wanna be sure to not mess up this part when I actually post.