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Tue Feb 26, 2013 12:17 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



I disagree, it contrasts Ki'Tzung's donation considering its greater value.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Feb 26, 2013 12:30 pm
crossroads says...



I will post today (a lot of school lately), but if you want to continue, I can always put what happened in my chapter retrospectively ^^
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 1:40 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



That's fine, I understand.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Feb 26, 2013 3:10 pm
crossroads says...



There. I so much hope it made sense >.<
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 3:14 pm
Alvarin says...



It made plenty of sense :)
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 4:32 pm
WartyFingleBlaster says...



All on me then? Okay I'll do it now. :) (not used to this kind of writing but I'll try my best)
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 4:39 pm
crossroads says...



Feel free to PM if you need any help ^^

Not about the world of ES, thought, I suggest Alvarin or DNX for that, lol
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:55 pm
WartyFingleBlaster says...



That is incredibly long D:
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:59 pm
crossroads says...



Long is always good, in my opinion, never worry about long posts ;)
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:18 pm
WartyFingleBlaster says...



*whew* Thanks, I thought I may have gone a bit TOO big for my first post though. I assume we're waiting on DNX to post next then?
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:27 pm
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Nah, long posts are awesome.
Yes, I would say that is the plan now - he's the one who knows what happens next, after all.
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:42 pm
Cole says...



I hope my twist didn't make the story too complicated. :D I'm excited to see what's going to happen next.
  





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Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:52 pm
WartyFingleBlaster says...



I'd say you added a nice tangent, I doubt the Greybeard will relent though. I think he will probably nag you a little bit.
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:54 pm
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I hope so. It's gonna be interesting. I'm not even sure how Einar is going to get around this yet xD
  





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Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:59 pm
WartyFingleBlaster says...



Haha, I didn't really plan for Moghakh to use his blood as sacrifice, it was a suggestion from a fiend but it worked so no complaints here. :)
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