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Wed Dec 05, 2012 4:15 am
Thelios says...



Hey, Shadow? Can I add in another character and change Dryden from single to taken?
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Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:20 pm
Shady says...



Sure

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Wed Dec 05, 2012 11:26 pm
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Name: Nalia Thelios
Nickname: Nal
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Class: Magician
Race: Human
Rank: Soldier
Skills: Intelligence, Magic, Dexterity
Weakness: Strength
Allegiance: Atraians
Appearance: In contrast to her future husband, Nalia only stands a mere 5'2" and weighs only 110 lbs. She has lower back length auburn hair that flows easily whenever she casts magic or in the wind. She has lively brown eyes that flare up when she's angry. She has a full length robe, which many people have voiced their discomfort, but she prefers the robe as opposed to trousers and a tunic. She carries a small dagger, but never has to get close enough to use it.
Personality: Despite Dryden's cold talk and climate, she intends to be talkative and out-going. Some people look down on Dryden for not being able to hush his fiancee up, but whenever someone makes a comment, she turns around and bites their head off, saying that no one controls her. She is soft-spoken in matters of the battlefield, but has proven to be excellent at retaining seemingly unimportant info when it comes to be important. Often considered a spy, she only flicks her wrist, allowing her to show off her magician's mark.
History: When she was a little girl in Atra, she often voiced her displeasure at being treated as if she wasn't good enough to be a soldier. Despite her displeasure, she was often persuaded to settle down and be quiet. As she got older, that displeasure only increased until no one could stop it. She was walking along the streets when a man cut her off, almost knocking her backwards and she lashed out, snarking at him that he thought he was all powerful because he could cut her off. The man started to attack when she back up, her fierce gaze staring defiantly up at him as she called a battle to him. He laughed heartily before agreeing. When the battle took place, Nalia barely had to move when the man swung out and she tapped his elbow before ducking under it, throwing her entire weight into elbowing his stomach and then slamming the heel of her palm into his jaw, causing him to crash to the ground. She looked down at him in slight disgust and walked away, unconcerned with the fact that she had just taken her Test. When she walked out the next day, her childhood friend Dryden had been sent to escort her to the queen. When Nalia got there, the queen asked Nalia what she wanted to do and Nalia looked at her confused before everything came crashing down. She looked up at Dryden and smiled. She requested to serve next to him, and despite the strange request, was granted it. Since then, she has been Dryden's sword where he has been her shield.
Up for love: No, engaged to childhood friend, Dryden Thelios.
Other: She knows Dryden's deepest secrets and is often sought after by foolish people thinking they can take her on. She often retails to holding Dryden's secrets close to her heart, where she has loved him for many years.
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:39 am
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Could I make a court fool?
A soul that knows it is loved but does not love itself, betrays its sediment: What is at the bottom rises to the surface ~Friedrich Nietzsche
  





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Thu Dec 06, 2012 1:04 am
Shady says...



Sounds fun. Go for it.

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"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 1:52 am
Thelios says...



Am I set for Nalia to join, Shadow?
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 11:18 am
Alvarin says...



I thought it might be fun for all character to be able to meet, even if they're from different countries, so I opened up a way for that in my last post :)
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 10:14 pm
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Yeah Thelios. I love her already! :)

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 2:06 am
AlmondEyes says...



Checking in!! Here's my profile :)

Spoiler! :
Name: Luna Wechester

Nickname: None

Age: 23

Gender:Female

Class: Warrior

Race: Shape-shifter; and type of wild cat or wolf, but prefers the Black Panther or white Wolf

Rank: Captain

Skills: Speed, Strength, and Stealth

Weakness: Magic

Allegiance: Nekoites thought she bears no ill will against the Atraians or the Genorians

Appearance: Long raven black hair with silver streaks that matches her piercing moonlight silver eyes with dark violet flecks. Beautiful lightly tanned skin. She keeps her bangs at eye level as most people are frightened. She has a long scar under her right eye and a small beauty mark just below the right side of her mouth. She's 6'1 tall with an athletic build. Her curvy body keep guys interested. Her hair also has a tendency to turn the same color as her eyes every full moon. Odd, right?

Personality: She's fiercely protective and she doesn't take crap from anybody. And she doesn't have a short temper, she's just fast to react to other people's bull. She's kind hearted and loyal, but doesn't trust easily. She's not afraid of much and stubborn like you wouldn't believe. If you need a shoulder to cry on she's there for you. She tells it like it is and she doesn't sugar coat it either. You respect her, she respects you.

History: She is the older of her identical twin sister. Luna's mother and father are highly ranked and respected among the king's soldiers in the Neko military. Both their mother and father trained them.As well as being well respected, their father was also feared for being one of the fiercest warriors in the military. Fortunate for them, Lini and Luna took after their father.They taught both her and her sister how to fight. they told them they didn't want to take any chances and wanted then to be trained for any problem that came their way. They trained to adapt and learn at an astonishing rate. Luna excelled in archery and hand to hand combat. They were trained in everything, and didn't hold back. They were pushed to their limits and made so they wouldn't break. She always keeps her cool no matter what the circumstances. She doesn't give into fear or intimidation, because neither will work on her anymore, so there's no use in trying. She hates it when people touch her, so don't do it, because the most likely end result will be her breaking your wrist. Most people find her a bit intimidating because of her eyes, the scar, her and height, but once you get past all of that, she's not that bad. By the time Luna and Lini were 17, they could practically leap from tall buildings.

As the years went on, they came to hone their skills, and eventually took their place beside their mother and father in the Neko military. Luna and her sister Lini are now the top two as bow and arrow snipers. They've never lost a challenge, and they don't intend on it. As well as being known throughout the military, their mother is held in high respect in society. She taught them etiquette, manners, as well as everything else a proper woman should know. She and her sister hated every minute of it. Any man who tried to court them were scared off by their scary father.

Up for love: Yes, she's straight

Other: Luna's primary weapon is bow Her father crafted himself from the bark of the oldest and most beautiful willow tree ever known and enchanted to protect her from harm. She also had small silver daggers she keeps hidden on her person in case of emergency.
Last edited by AlmondEyes on Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:24 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 2:20 am
Thelios says...



Most of us just take 1. We have a general understanding of more, but our training usually leaves us with one craft we know above the others. Trinity, I'll post as soon as there's a few more posts.
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 5:19 am
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Hey, SideraAquila and Trinity, I was wondering if our characters could become friends. Is that ok?
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 6:50 am
Trinity9001 says...



sure! :) You're talking about Raven right? And that's fine Thelios.
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:18 pm
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I'd like to get in on the action here and have Luna and her father go with the king as part of his guard to discuss the negotiations.
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 10:55 pm
SidereaAquila says...



That's good with me.
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:47 pm
AlmondEyes says...



I'd like to make it official in the SB and have the king request it, though. Is that Ok with you, Impaired? And also, who's looking for love? Alliance doesn't matter.

DT:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=95938&start=30
Last edited by AlmondEyes on Sun Dec 09, 2012 12:09 am, edited 1 time in total.
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