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Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:59 pm
kidashka says...



Don't think I can post until Monday so please could you briefly mention my character over the next few days? :D
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Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:46 am
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Kidash- Sure! I'll do it in my next post. (:

Dreamy - Oh dear God! homie W? xD I love it, homie D. lol
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Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:19 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Lolol. Yeah, I tend to call people that.
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 9:52 am
ScarlettFire says...



Wow. Sequel already? I posted Zara's profile in the SB but I won't post anything until later.

So yes, I'm back.
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 4:23 pm
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yay!
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 4:34 pm
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So. Shall I post?

Oh, and what is Zara going to be doing? She's still with Eigth, right?
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:35 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Well, we're picking up after the war is over. If you read the old SB, Eighth just sort of... left her alone. So you're most likely back with the other Shadows unless or roaming the land by yourself, whichever you fancy.
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:42 pm
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Okay, the SB is off to a lovely start. After everyone's gotten a few posts in, and the SB is flowing smoothly, we should introduce some sort of event. Any ideas? We need something that's not a war. Been there, done that.

I have one idea, let me know what you think. And please, suggest your own!

So, an old tale resurfaces. A stone is hidden... somewhere, and it will grant the finder one, and only one wish. The Riders want it to heal themselves so they can get their revenge. The Shadows want it to get more power. And so the quest for it begin, resulting, possibly, in the Riders getting their revenge (hence title).

So, yup. Whaddaya think?
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:43 pm
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Still with the shadows. I believe Zara is cowed. Hm.
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:31 am
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Cowed? Last time I checked she was not a bovine... hmmm....
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:53 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



I like the idea Dreamy! :D

But in the mean time, we need an idea that we can work on until this "hunt for the stone" comes into play (well, if anyone else likes it, that it). I have a little one that needs developing if your interested.

However it's basically going to involve more war/conflict between the Riders and Shadows. Which is basically what this SB is about, y'know. I don't know. I'll work on it and if the plot gets moving too slow I'll post it and see what you guys think. (;
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 10:54 am
ScarlettFire says...



Bovine? No. Scared? Hell yes. The other definition of 'cowed' is intimidated/subdued.

As for the in-between idea... How about we expand on the Zara/Manarian conflict? He does want revenge, doesn't he? They should probably end up in an interesting predicament.... Er, eventually. Oh, and I like this 'hunt for the stone' idea too.
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:22 pm
ToritheMonster says...



huh. never heard that word in me life.

And whitetiger, what was your little idea?
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 10:13 pm
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Well, we've had Eighth getting ideas from Zara when she turned traitor. What about the rebelling riders start to (Bree would be behind this. After all, she's a little crazy right now xD) capture some of the Shadow riders. Trying to worm information out of them.

And after that they start to find out the the Shadows have a very big secret that could help the Riders win back the ruling position. And thats why the shadows are desperate for the stone?

The only thing is...what would the secret be? The only thing I can think of for that would be that there is a day that the Shadows would be at their very weakest. I dunno...

And, of course, we're going to have an epic showdown between Bree and Eighth as well as Zara and Manarian. xD

The second part of my 'idea' will remain a secret for now. :D I will introduce it later on. (;
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:09 pm
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kidashka says...



I really want to get back into this but it seemed I missed so much whilst I was away! Can someone please fill me in? :)
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