Hey, guys. Here's a short story... Apparently, writers block is gone, I've been writing a lot lately. xD I know the start is a bit cliché... xD Anyways, I wish you guys could help me with my grammar... so tear it apart. P.S. The story's narrator is a boy. xD
I looked at the dark sky as I lay down on the roof of my house and thought of her. I still do that... and that's because stars remind me of those eyes of hers, like blessed crystal raindrops, like all those tears I've cried for her. But even when God gave her the most beautiful eyes I've seen, Lynnda was blind.
Reminiscing good old times as I gaze at the moon, that reminds me of that heart of hers: immense, sincere, and sometimes so innocent. I wonder how it never runs out of love for everyone, that's what makes her who she is. But even when I could see what her heart carried as she talked, it was unreachable for me as a lover, like the moon. I laugh ironically as I say that Lynnda was beautiful, inside and outside.
I remember those lips, that repeated words of wisdom; Words that saved me and taught me lots of things, when I was hoping to be deaf, when I was shifting to the wrong road. Oh, Lynnda, always wearing her Bible as a bracelet.
Most likely, you must be thinking I'm cheesy, saying to yourself, "Hey, Lynnda was almost perfect!", or "The dude is so hooked, he looks at her with the eyes from his soul!" No matter what you're thinking, both of them are probably right.
Once, I challenged myself to forget about her. But my plans would always turn around and work the other way; I would love her more and more, it was impossible. Because Lynnda was like an angel on Earth...but then again, she was blind.
I waited for her, because I knew that it was not the right time; I was hoping her relationship with the other guy to be over soon. It was worthless to hope so. I guess all the waiting was in vain.
It's been seven years, she's getting married any minute now. And as I put on my tie, looking at the mirror, getting ready for the special occasion, I wonder if Lynnda had to be blind all this time. Perhaps I could've helped her by just telling her what I feel, she never noticed I was deeply in love with her. But I guess it's too late now, eh?
I've been through a lot all these years, my mind and my heart are in a constant fight, and I can't seem to help it. I never thought the worst day of my life would be one of the best days in hers. Should I pretend this is not a living nightmare and congratulate them as I die a little inside? Or should I interrupt the ceremony and drag them both into this misery with me? It really hurts watching as your high school crush and your best friend fall in love.
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