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I quote this from the edited part. Of course, because we didn't see the previous chapter, we don't know why he won't touch her, but in the unedited version, you explain that she doesn't like to be touched. IF you haven't mentioned it before in your own story, you should, because he could be simply condescending here, you know?The glass was very tall and big, probably too heavy for her thin arms to keep holding for long. Without much thought, I handled the glass from its rim with my thumb and forefinger, making sure I wouldn’t touch her.
“Drink this, please.”
I turned my heavy head to look at her and found her hands stretching forward, a long fogged glass resting between them. Her eyebrows knitted and worry dressed her small features when she saw my face, obviously showing the same signs of fatigue she suffered from yesterday.
“Are… Are you okay? You need rest, Mr Julius,” she said in a shaken voice. “You don’t look good.”
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