Before you start reading, I would like to say I'm very well aware I have a lot of punctuation and format errors. I haven't written in a long time. Pathetic excuse, I know, but hey, it counts for something, right? Well, I felt like writing in a man's point of view, so here it goes.
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Even before her mouth opened, to speak out the words that would break me, I already knew what was going to be thrown at me.
“I’m sorry,” She said, her voice barely a whisper. Her brown eyes scanned my face.
I loved those brown eyes, they were the ones that I would often wake up to seeing, right beside me.
She swallowed, “I can’t do this anymore. I’m so sorry Will, but we can’t go on. It’s over,”
Everything went blank.
Over?
No, it can’t be.
She said my name.
I loved it when she said my name.
Only her perfect lips could make my heart beat like a hummingbird’s when she pronounced that one word.
Over.
No, it can’t be.
I opened my mouth to say something, anything, but nothing came out except for a shallow, “Okay.”
She gave me a small smile, kissed my cheek, and walked away.
Just like that, a whole three hundred and sixty five days of her was given to me, and then just as quickly snatched away from my palms.
She’s gone now.
Gone for good.
I pulled out the small box from my hand, which was behind my back.
Opening it, it revealed a silver band, with a diamond placed upon it, and inside engraved was “forever”.
I was going to ask her to be with me forever that day.
But all I got was three hundred and sixty five days.
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