Hey! Your story was an entertaining read. I liked how you didn't use names because then it didn't distract from the story and conflict. I do have to say, however, that cancer is a widely used medical illness so it was kind of a cliche, but overall, I liked it.
OMG!!! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!!! This is an amazing story!!!!!! The only thing that I would change would be the setting. What kind of atmosphere is it???? Other than that, this is a heartfelt, compassionate story. Again: Love it!
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining behind the clouds is the sun still shining
Awh this story is so sweet. I especially liked it when she was leadin up to tell him why she hadn't been in touch and I also loved th ending. Overall this story is just breath taking. keep writing:)
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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