This was really gentle, and beautiful but I felt as if the two characters were too perfect. I mean their personalities seemed too rushed. Maybe if you told us about Jason's life as an angel to show that he truly needs Eliza...anyways that's just a thought. But remember Love is not always perfect.
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.
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