Hey! Your story was an entertaining read. I liked how you didn't use names because then it didn't distract from the story and conflict. I do have to say, however, that cancer is a widely used medical illness so it was kind of a cliche, but overall, I liked it.
OMG!!! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!!! This is an amazing story!!!!!! The only thing that I would change would be the setting. What kind of atmosphere is it???? Other than that, this is a heartfelt, compassionate story. Again: Love it!
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining behind the clouds is the sun still shining
Awh this story is so sweet. I especially liked it when she was leadin up to tell him why she hadn't been in touch and I also loved th ending. Overall this story is just breath taking. keep writing:)
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