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Tue Apr 01, 2008 11:13 am
myfreindsavamp says...



I was just wondering.....don't get me wrong though I do like it.
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I thought it was cute how they proved every onr wrong
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Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:48 pm
ashleylee says...



You really did well with this one! I mean, you said you didn't give them names on purpose but I think they don't need names. You made it so it was better leaving them anonymous. It just seemed to flow better that way. I'm glad you didn't give them names! :)

I really don't have any nit-picks for you. There was nothing wrong with it that I saw so thumbs-up to you :)
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Wed Apr 02, 2008 9:22 am
idle muse says...



Thanks for all the positive feedback! It really is appreciated.
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