This is my very first time trying to write.
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Teagan woke up to the buzzing sound of her alarm clock. Kicking her black sheets off her she stretched out, hitting her alarm clock off her night stand. It landed with a thud, than the buzzing stopped. Rolling over she took in a deep breath, soon feeling the soft tongue of her puppy on her cheek. Smiling, she sat up and sat there with her eyes closed. It was dark in her room, that way she could sleep in as long as she wanted, even though her brother had always woke her up in the morning. Feeling the bright light on her eye-lids she covered her eyes. “Get out!” Teagan yelled at her brother as he began laughing at her. Rubbing the sleep out of her eyes she rested her hands on her black sheets. Looking up at her brother with her piercing green eyes, she had a pissed off look on her face. Her black hair that was medium length fell over her shoulder.
Standing up she stretched out, a little patch of her stomach showed as she did. Slipping on her Hello Kitty slippers on, she stumbled though the messy room, and past her brother to go let Clark, her puppy out. Watching as the little beagle walked along side of her she smiled softly. Stepping on to the stair case it creaked. Once in the kitchen she slid the door open and watched the puppy run out of the house.
Walking over do the coffee pot she dumped out the old coffee into the sink and rinsed out the dirty coffee pot. Beginning the new pot she took in a deep breath and glanced at the sliding glass doors. Sitting on one of the chairs she watched as the puppy ran around the yard.
Aleck, Teagan's brother, walked down the creaky steps and looked at her. “Good morning sunshine.” He said to her. He watched Teagan glare at him, but smiled back to the glare. Walking over to the glass door he let Clark in and watched as the puppy began to run around the house. Sitting down at the island in the kitchen, he looked up at Teagan. “Its noon, you should be up anyways.” Aleck said. Watching as Teagan shook her head and slipped off her chair to get the coffee cups.
Watching as she poured the coffee into the cups, Aleck reached over and grabbed his cup. Walking over to the counter where the sugar was, he poured some into his coffee and passed it on to his sister. Pulling out the creamer he poured it in to his coffee and put it back. “I have to go to work in two hours.” He heard Teagan say. Taking a sip of his coffee, an eye brow raised he nodded then watched as she ran up stairs. Soon hearing the water running and hitting the shower floor. He walked over to the couch and then turned on the TV. Slowly, he fell asleep.
Aleck woke with a jolt, hearing the door slam and a car starting. He rubbed the sleep out of his eyes and walked to the door, watching as Teagan drove off. Walking up the steps he rubbed his hair to mess it up. Walking into his own bathroom he started the shower and got in him self.
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