That was pretty damn good, Squallz. It's a little bit like my own romance story... okay, not really, but they both have rain in it! XD Anyway, I spotted some misspellings and a few moments where I didn't understand what was going on (like with the bruise. That could've been explained a bit better), but otherwise, a job well done.
"I think it goes until it's done." "Don't we all."
i liked it very well enough. i understand that it was and english assingment, but i wish you would re-write it so that it would be a bit more descriptive. other than that it was very well imagined!
-lora
"Don't bother just to be better than your contemporaries or predecessors.
Try to be better than yourself."
--William Faulkner
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes
