That was pretty damn good, Squallz. It's a little bit like my own romance story... okay, not really, but they both have rain in it! XD Anyway, I spotted some misspellings and a few moments where I didn't understand what was going on (like with the bruise. That could've been explained a bit better), but otherwise, a job well done.
"I think it goes until it's done." "Don't we all."
i liked it very well enough. i understand that it was and english assingment, but i wish you would re-write it so that it would be a bit more descriptive. other than that it was very well imagined!
-lora
"Don't bother just to be better than your contemporaries or predecessors.
Try to be better than yourself."
--William Faulkner
