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the peace and simplicity of the color green



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Tue Mar 19, 2024 4:41 pm
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momonster says...



𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓅𝑒𝒢𝒸𝑒 𝒢𝓃𝒹 π“ˆπ’Ύπ“‚π“…π“π’Ύπ’Έπ’Ύπ“‰π“Ž π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Έπ‘œπ“π‘œπ“‡ 𝑔𝓇𝑒𝑒𝓃

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𝑔𝓇𝑒𝑒𝓃: π’Άπ“ˆπ“ˆπ‘œπ’Έπ’Ύπ’Άπ“‰π‘’π’Ή π“Œπ’Ύπ“‰π’½ π“ˆπ‘’π“π’»-𝒢𝒸𝒸𝑒𝓅𝓉𝒢𝓃𝒸𝑒, π“π‘œπ“‹π‘’, 𝒢𝓃𝒹 π‘’π“‚π‘œπ“‰π’Ύπ‘œπ“ƒπ’Άπ“ π“Œπ‘’π“π“π“ƒπ‘’π“ˆπ“ˆ. 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Έπ‘œπ“π‘œπ“‡ π‘œπ’» π‘”π“‡π‘œπ“Œπ“‰π’½.

π“…π“‡π‘’π“‹π’Ύπ‘œπ“Šπ“ˆ π“Žπ‘’π’Άπ“‡π“ˆ:
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Spearmint says...



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i love green :D excellent title, momo!! can't wait to read your poetry this NaPo <3
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EllieMae says...



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I love this theme so much :D I love green! I cant wait for this, momo!!
”Life can only be understood backward, but it must be lived forwards (so you might as well do Duolingo ).”


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momonster says...



1.

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i am a superfluous, sporadic, spontaneous being
my words jump, bounce, leap
in an attempt, struggle, endeavor
to be heard.

i have always been energetic, lively, spirited
now i am annoying, bothersome, irritating
humans around avoid, dodge, circumvent me.
i am too much.

i long to be loved, cared for, cherished
for someone to see, know, hear me
but i am overlooked, shunned, forgotten
i am nothing.
  





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starbean says...



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great first poem, momo! it's beautiful and very relatable, i really enjoyed reading it. the last stanza was my favorite. i liked the contrast between "i am too much" and "i am nothing", it really put you in the shoes of how the writer feels. I can't wait to see what else you do this month! :)
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i live my present for my past.
i heal the broken parts of my soul
by gently putting myself back together.
i feel what i didn't let myself feel.
i do what i didn't let myself do.
i say what i wouldn't let myself say.
and i change.
  





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AmayaStatham says...



Spoiler! :
If I could I would quote poem 2 entirely, to emphatise how nice I think it is. Great work Momo! Hope to read more of your poetry soon, all the best ^^
  








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