hello new person on the site and in the threads! your writing is so lovely to read! the sound of the lines flow so well, being quite beautiful to read. your varied language & word choices is able to be interesting or striking, at times even defining a poem's interest ("decolonizing", "capillary", "rhapsody"). it's fun to see what kind of words will be used considering how unexpected your word choices tend to be due to their uniqueness or being generally less common to be first thought of - it makes your poetry dostinct! this writing is just wonderful, I will definitely be looking out for more!
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind