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Mon Jul 22, 2013 3:14 am
yubbies21 says...



Hey all!

I really need to pick up the pace on my reviewing. If you want a review, post here and I'll get to you as soon as I can! :D

I will review:
- Poetry
- Lyrics...I guess
- Short stories
- Novel Chapters, but have me start with the beginning, please!
- I adore fantasy, especially medieval fantasy!

I will not review:
- Fan Fiction
- Horror or Slash
- R-rated works
- I prefer to stay clear of mushy romance stuff.

I don't want or need anything in return, but If you want to donate points or give me a review in return, I'd be grateful.
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Mon Jul 22, 2013 7:51 pm
Alpha says...



Hi! Can you please review my poem, The Orchids?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102986

Post me anything you want me to read on my wall.

Cheers!
XO Alpha
  





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Tue Jul 23, 2013 1:30 am
yubbies21 says...



Done!
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Wed Jul 24, 2013 3:58 pm
KingKamor says...



Hi there. If possible, I would like more criticism for my sci-fi novel, Rings of Rhea. There are four parts out right now, and they're fairly long, so there's no need to feel obligated to go through it all.

Rings of Rhea - Prologue

If you end up reviewing it, then thanks in advance!
Last edited by KingKamor on Fri Jul 26, 2013 4:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:43 pm
yubbies21 says...



I'm working on it...:)
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