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There's this poem I wrote a while ago which is very special to me but it didn't get a review yet for a couple of days.. Which depressed me a little because honestly this poem is the whole reason I started poetry. So please be kind enough to review it, and I'll review you back in less than 24 hours. :D

A Murdered Love Poem:
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here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings