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Sun Apr 15, 2012 7:20 am
Caesar says...



Hello, guys.
Your favorite Illuminist is back with his famously short (but to the point) reviews :wink:
What will I review? Fantasy, fantasy primarily. Sci-fi is also okay, as is action/adventure
What I most definitely won't review? Poetry and articles. Oh, and hugely long pieces of work, unless I adore it and have promised.
Anything else, link and I'll see what I can do (which will be review it, of course).
Last edited by Caesar on Wed Apr 18, 2012 4:16 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:45 pm
Ikerot says...



Do you review Scifi Fantasy? Lol xD

work.php?id=94631

It's a tad long, I'm currently splitting it into parts so that the people here can read it easier. It's twelve pages, AND IT'S ONLY THE PROLOGUE!

Yaay, first person to ask! (Unless somebody does this before me as I type this out)
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 1:12 am
zohali93 says...



hey. :)
can you review this please and thanks.

work.php?id=94720
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:55 am
Caesar says...



I have reviewed both your works. Hope they helped. :)
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 11:52 am
zohali93 says...



? i cant really see it though? :(
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 1:24 pm
Caesar says...



What? No, I'm sure I did. :(
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 3:45 pm
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thanks!
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 4:30 pm
Caesar says...



My pleasure. It was originally longer, though
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Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:30 am
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Double I, how about my novel? It's only four short chapters and a prologue at the moment.

work.php?id=94143

That's the revised prologue. Every chapter is attached to that as well.

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When I make you cry
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Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:06 pm
Caesar says...



Done, UpandOut15.
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Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:43 pm
Jalmoc says...



Hi there ItalianIlluminist. :) My name's Jalmoc, or Jal for short. I've been on this site forever, but I stopped for awhile and now I don't know who is who. But anyways, I've selected you (if you want to) to review my FanFic piece. :D I'm pretty easy going when something needs fixed, so just tear it up. :) It's a Star Wars piece by the way. :D

work.php?id=94948
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Fri Apr 27, 2012 5:29 am
Caesar says...



It will be done. However, I lament my lack knowledge of the Star Wars universe.
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Fri Apr 27, 2012 5:05 pm
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I don't know how to do links.
Would you try to find and review Oggo the Dwarf's Adventure in the Underland please?
It's a Humorous Narrative Poem for younger readers.
If you can't find it then thankyou anyway.
P.S. Could anyone tell me how to find links?
  





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Fri Apr 27, 2012 6:39 pm
Caesar says...



Sure. To find links, simply copy/paste the link at the very top of the screen.
This is a link, for example chat.php
And yes, I'll get on it.
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Fri Apr 27, 2012 7:34 pm
Calla says...



Yo dude, will you review this for a friend? Apparenlty I know more peoples on this site then him. work.php?id=94885
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