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Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:21 pm
Lydia1995 says...



Hey everyone,

I'm on a bit of a reviewing go slow at the moment and need some specific things to review. My reviews usually have some nit-picky things (if required) and then general comments on plot and character etc.

Things I will review:
All Novels (If you're a few chapters in I'll catch up by reading the other chapters but I won't catch up more than five chapters so if your looking for a chapter five or six plus review then write me a synopsis of the story so far :) )
All Short Stories
Fan-fiction that is Harry Potter related

Things I can review but haven't got as much experience:
Poetry
Other Fan-fiction

Please don't ask me to review Lyrics, Scripts, Art/Photography!

Ask away :D
Thinking about what you COULD achieve will get you no where. You've got to chase your dreams.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=92400 - Need a review?
  





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Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:03 am
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SpeedyPencil says...



Could you review this viewforum.php?f=365 ?
Thanks in advance!
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:37 am
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Rascalover says...



Will you please review my short story
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:07 am
ZlyWilk says...



I have a poem called Sense. Mind taking a peek?
formerly GoldenQuill

no
e s c a p e
from the storm
inside of me

Anna, please,
you'll only make
it worse!
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:24 pm
RileyStone says...



Hey would you mind reviewing my prologue?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=361&t=91751
Who do I belong to?
Not earth, not world
Not evil, not
mortals
Not wretches, not horrors

-- Project 86
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 3:32 am
Xyra says...



I'd adore it if you reviewed my revised short story Maia.... I realllly love it and I need help :P
viewtopic.php?f=2&t=92852
More Than Words Can Say
Forever Yours
Xyra Pekkala


PS I will love you forever if you review my story Maia (revised version!)
viewtopic.php?f=2&t=92852
I'll review something of yours in return :P
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:44 pm
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MoonlightMayhem says...



I'll give you oodles of virtual chocolate if you review my new novel, Keychain Magic... here's the link :D

viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92871
Music <3

Death Cab for Cutie - Funeral For A Friend - A Day To Remember - Taking Back Sunday - Safetysuit - There For Tomorrow - OneRepublic - All American Rejects - Yellowcard - Motion City Soundtrack
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:44 pm
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MoonlightMayhem says...



And I'll swap my writing for yours if you'd like?
Music <3

Death Cab for Cutie - Funeral For A Friend - A Day To Remember - Taking Back Sunday - Safetysuit - There For Tomorrow - OneRepublic - All American Rejects - Yellowcard - Motion City Soundtrack
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 5:06 pm
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firefly882 says...



Will you review my chapter? Thanks!
"Have I ever told you the story about how our kingdom was nearly torn apart by greed and betrayal? No? Well then gather 'round, my children, and let Ol' Nan tell you about the Legends of Arenthul." ~Naneria
  








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