Young Writers Society

So, I know I haven't been on in while, but once Christmas break starts, I'll be on almost non-stop again. I had a thread in here before, but it wasn't posted on in a while, so I let it fade away. Anyway, I'm starting a new one and just in time for the holidays!! So if you need any reviews, call upon me!

What I will review: short stories, poems, lyrics, novels, scripts, art & photography

What I will not review: nonfiction, fanfics

Here's how I'll review"
1. I will say hi because it's polite ^_^
2. I will tell you how much I liked it
3. I will tell you what you did good and what you did bad
4. I will quote any punctuation/speling/grammatical errors and fix them in purple.
5. I will give you any suggestions I can think of that will make your piece better

So, request away!

Could you review a chapter of my fantasy novel? Pretty please? It's [url]topic91435.html[/url]
Cheers
Aquareed

Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
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Chapter one:
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I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae

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I'd really enjoy a review on the piece of mine Charlie. Hope you enjoy it

I'm still pretty new and I don't know how to post links to my topic on here, but it would be great if you could review the first chapter of my novel titled, "May the World Burn". It would be very appreciated, thank you.


~ Misfit ~

I would love it if you would review my shoort story Maia, topic91761.html. I want to get it published!

Please could you review the second half of the first chapter of Spark? viewtopic.php?f=361&t=91618&p=944493#p944493. There's a link to the first half in there if you want to read it before you review ^^.

Hey, Noelle. :]

I was hoping you could review my short story, Toxic Valentine, for me.

Thanks!