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Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:57 pm
Starrywolf says...



Hey, writers!

I, being incredibly lazy, have trouble making myself review. But I know I'll do it if someone's waiting for me, so here we are.
I'll review anything. Anything at all. But I might not review images well, because I'm artistically impaired and don't think very visually.

Just say hi, link to your story, and tell me if there's anything specific you'd like me to focus on.

I like to think I'm active, being on for several hours a day, and will get to your stories as soon as possible. Thanks!

And what would Starry like in return, you ask?

Nothing necessary!

But thanking me on my wall, following me, becoming my friend (I like those,) or reviewing one of my stories, or any combination of, would make me happy.
  





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Wed Nov 30, 2011 2:54 am
sarebear says...



Hiya Starry,

It would be great if you would take a look at my poem: topic90967.html

If you would like me to review something of yours, post it on my wall.

Thanks!
sare
Give a man a fish, he'll eat for a day. Teach a man to fish, he'll eat for a lifetime. Talk to a hungry man about fish, and you're a psychologist.
  





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Sun Dec 04, 2011 9:45 pm
KatTrain says...



post941103.html#p941103

If you could critique the heck out of me I'd love it.
As far as poetry goes, I'm a masochist.
Thanks
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....
  





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Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:05 pm
Starrywolf says...



Done and done!
  





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Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:44 am
Alliaaryn5665 says...



PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE post941559.html#p941559



And anything else your heart may desire.
You think you are any different from me,or yourfriends?Or this tree?If you listenhard enough,you canhear every living thingbreathing together.You canfeel everything growing.We are all living togethereven if most folksdon't act like it.We all havethe same roots,and we are allbranches of the sametree.
  





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Tue Dec 06, 2011 11:55 pm
Mrsgenny62 says...



Hey u on still? ill try...
  





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Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:03 pm
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BrightLights18 says...



Hi there! Could you maybe give me a second opinion on the first part of my short story? topic90714.html Thanks!! :D
  





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Sat Dec 10, 2011 10:12 am
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mikepyro says...



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Der ya go! And I'll gladly review any piece of yours you want in return!
  








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