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Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:21 am
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crescent says...



Spoiler! :
Hello. I am Crescent, the This Guy referred to in the title. I often waste my time doing pointless things and being saddened by my lack of YWS notifications. So, I've decided to take up reviewing.

I'm a pretty good with grammar. I'll review anything, although I'm not the greatest with poetry. So if you have any works you would like more reviews for, leave a link below.

I, however, reserve the right to not review your work for any reason at all. I'm looking for a good read. Also, I lied about the kittens. I don't have any spare kittens lying around to be given away. However, a free virtual, purple elephant is included with link provided even if I choose not to review it.

I have added an amendment to this creed. If I have reviewed your work, please give me a response so I know that I'm not imagining up fictional online friends. Even a "Got it" on my wall will suffice. It's not required, but it hurts my feeling when you don't. :'( Please don't make me cry.


I'm sorry, but this review thread is closed until December 18, 2011, partly because it's too time consuming (I type only around 125 words every 15 minutes) and partly because I have finals coming up and also partly because I'm in a novel writing mood. If you do request a review in this thread prior to December 18th, I will probably not respond until after December 18th.
Last edited by crescent on Sun Nov 27, 2011 2:38 am, edited 2 times in total.
Please take care to use good grammar when making a post!

"grammer" 1519 matches on YWS *twitches*

Rydia is the ruler of the world. :(
  





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Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:47 am
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Vervain says...



Whaaaat? No kittens? D; Oh well. Could you take a look at this and see if you can review it?: topic90050.html
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Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:37 pm
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STobsessed says...



Aww, I really wanted a kitty :? Could you just read my short story then? forum5.html
Please and thank you.
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:33 pm
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crescent says...



Done and done.
Please take care to use good grammar when making a post!

"grammer" 1519 matches on YWS *twitches*

Rydia is the ruler of the world. :(
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:02 am
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Jas says...



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Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:01 am
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psudiname says...



can you review the first chapter of my novel?
topic90626.html
thanks
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:22 pm
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Benrobertringrose says...



Would be extremely grateful for a review as I'm entering this into a competition and wouldn't mind some feedback on it!

post938281.html#p938281

Thank you! :), If you ever need a review yourself just let me know :)
  








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