Young Writers Society

Welcome to the C's Emporium,

I know I had my thread a while back but I got so busy with my studies that I couldn't even visit the site. But this time, I'm back for good and I intend to review just about anything (I hope) that is thrown at me.

My overall reviewing style is giving overview at first, then going over to the general mistakes made in the story. Then I comment on the plot. But my main focus is on descriptions and character descriptions. Then about the title and anything else I want to add, I'd add it at the end of the review. Anyway, you'll see how I review once I review.

Can review

Action / Adventure
Fantasy
Science Fiction (but I won't be able to review it if it is too serious)
Romance (I'll try my best, because this is not my area of expertise. Not even in real life )
Fan Fiction (I'll have to know the story it's based on, but you really want me to, I could go over the general story without going into the plot.)
Poetry (I'm not a big poetry person, but I'll do my best)

I'll also review novels if you want me to. But give me some time, because I would have to review each and every chapter.

Cannot review

Historical Fiction
General Fiction
Lyrics
Scripts

Might be able to review

Arts and Photography (I'll try my best, but don't expect a great review, because I have little experience in reviewing these.

If the story or poem is so complex that only the author can understand it, I won't be able to review it

The cost is a cookie per review

Alright, let the reviewing begin!

Oh come on... No one yet?

Waaaait, there's meee
So, I thought your previous reviews of my novel were very useful, so would you mind reviewing the 3rd and 4th chapters?
They clarify a lot of things about the narrative, and also I did some experimenting with the way I write, and I would very much appreciate a review from you
topic88721.html - chapter 3
topic88767.html - chapter 4

Thanks in advance;)

*hand payment up front*
Hey, C! Would you mind taking a look at this for me when you get the chance. I warn you that it's a little darker than what I normally write.
Thanks,
-Sea-

Thanks for requesting. Thought this thread was going to die unnoticed.

I'll look at all three right now.

Edit - Polink: All Done
Searria: Done, nice story by the way.

No one? I'm sad...

*gives cookie*

This is my baby. When finished, it'll be, like, six chapters or so, and it's at four chapters right now. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love some fresh eyes on it, as it's gone through a fair bit of editing.

Chirantha,

I've just made a batch of delicious sugar cookies too! ^_^

So, it's just a fun little poem. Mostly, I'm just hoping it's enjoyable/makes sense. You be the judge, yeah?

topic89047.html

Thank you Really appreciate it.

- Audy

*Takes cookies and smiles*

Alright, I'll review them.

Twit - I'm sorry I didn't see that you posted yesterday, please forgive me. I'll review it as soon as possible. I'm kinda busy at the moment as I have a physics test in two days. But, I swear I'll review it.

Audy - Poem reviewed

Twit - Chapter 1 reviewed
Chapter 2 reviewed

Hai! Okay, so a long time ago I said I'd ask you for a review, but I ended up not finishing that piece of writing because I'm such a good procrastinator

Anyway, I have something for you now, if you'd care to review it: post930261.html#p930261

It is general fiction, or 'horror' to be more specific, so I don't know if you'll want to? But anyway, I thought I'd ask and then leave it up to you

Ooh, horror. I'll definitely review it then.

Kitty15 - Done. Sorry for the lateness.

Any more?

Hey there:) *hands over a huge, crunchy chocolate cookie*

I have a poem for you! It's romantic, but not very complicated. Honestly
viewtopic.php?t=89852
Thanks in advance!
polly xx

Polink - Poem reviewed.

Anymore?