z

Young Writers Society


Reviews from an Arctic Monkey!



User avatar
532 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 27927
Reviews: 532
Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:36 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Hello Everyone!
I'm here and back for reviews.

What I like to review:
Short Stories+ Novels of:
Action/Adeventure
Fantasy
Historical
Science-Fiction
General

Also-
Art & Photography
Lyrics

What I don't mind reviewing:
General Articles
Reviews
Poetry
Scripts
Romantic Short Stories or Novels

What I'm not too keen on reviewing:
Fanfiction Short Stories or Novels (depending on what they are about, so if you need a fanfiction review, please notify me and I'll see if I know about it :) )
Advanced Critiques

Also, I will 'like' the reqests if I have done them!

Bring it on!
(Sorry I didn't specify before what I review and don't, I was sort of in a rush!)
-Arc
Last edited by ArcticMonkey on Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:23 am, edited 2 times in total.
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





User avatar
57 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 6235
Reviews: 57
Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:42 pm
View Likes
Wariofart says...



Hey, do you think you can review a movie script? I'd really love a second opinion on it. It's the beginning of my script, Level Up! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic84917.html

Thank you in advance, and thanks for opening a Review thread! (you are awesome) :smt003.

EDIT: It looks like I got my second opinion, so I won't say you have to review this, just if you want. Sorry about that :?
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"
  





User avatar
532 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 27927
Reviews: 532
Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:15 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done! I did not see that edit, hahah. Well, I hope my review still helped!

Who's next?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





User avatar
135 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1747
Reviews: 135
Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:25 pm
View Likes
stargazer9927 says...



Will you review my action/adventure novel (it's only the first chapter so it's a lot easier to get people to review it)?

viewtopic.php?t=85169
Let's eat mom.
Let's eat, mom.
Good grammar saves lives :D
  





User avatar
532 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 27927
Reviews: 532
Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:33 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Finished, good story! Who else wants a review?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





User avatar
201 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 3762
Reviews: 201
Fri Aug 05, 2011 1:21 am
View Likes
Flemzo says...



Got time for a play?

topic85367.html

the link is to Act II, Scene 2. There are links to the rest of the parts of the play if you haven't read any of it. Thanks!
  





User avatar
1125 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 53415
Reviews: 1125
Fri Aug 05, 2011 9:49 pm
StellaThomas says...



Voila! topic85168.html
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010
  





User avatar
30 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 998
Reviews: 30
Sun Aug 07, 2011 6:56 am
chloe13 says...



Hey, feel like reviewing a drama essay? It's fine if you turn it down, I would probably turn it down too, it's just i'm really bad at picking out my own faults and I really need a good mark on this, so, I'll love you forever if you review it!:)

post896357.html#p896357
  





User avatar
47 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 269
Reviews: 47
Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:39 pm
Skorpionne says...



Hey! Could you review this for me?
I've learned so much from people who never existed - Unknown
  








cron
This is a house of homes, a sacred place, by human passion made divinely sweet.
— Alfred Joyce Kilmer