Hey Ziggie! I was wondering if you could review my contest entry, A Deadly Occupation. I just edited it and want to know if there's anything else I missed that needs work.
Thanks so much!
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people: psychopaths and mystery writers. I'm the kind that pays better. ~Rick Castle
Um, hey I could use some reveiws. Since you don't do poetry...boo hoo... then I guess you could give me some feedback on my short stories. Beware, I am a poet, not a fictionist! So, they are a bit cheesy, but I woul love the input! Just go to my portfolio and then the folder that says stories. Any of those I would love if you could reveiw. Thanks! Bye. -Cammie
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to persue them" -Walt Disney
Hey, remember me? I'd love it if you'd take a look at my rant, Bluebell Blues. It's not a story or anything, but if you enjoy laughing at an icecream-addict's misery I think you'll enjoy it
Oh hai. If you're okay with it, could you review my work? It's the first chapter of something, but I screwed up trying to put it in novel format. So I suppose I have just that up right now.
Genres include SF, slice of life and friendship. Please do check it out~
Remember when the platform was sliding into the fire pit and I said, "Goodbye!" and you were like "NO WAY." and then I was all, "We pretended we were going to murder you." That was great.
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