Young Writers Society

Hi people, very simple layout. You're coming to me for a reason I assume. I will be upfront and say that I encourage dialogue between myself and you, in reviews. Those are the expectations between us, which vary with out interest and the nature of the work. What I will actually review though...

Poetry, Novels, Novellas, Chapters, Music, Sheet Music, Art, etc. Anything (EXCEPT for web design, coding, computer graphics...I don't trust my lack of expertise). I've a background in the arts and have a very firm grasp of the schools of thought, criticism, and on. I can read music and write it and sound like your professor; the difference is that I'm not stuck up in those towers of theirs and am just like you.

You can expect me to be as analytical as you desire, however, I will always look at the body of work and attempt to find what it is and then what it doesn't do. I don't pamper, I don't mollycoddle, nor do I tell you you're crap. My goal is to help you do what you ask for and help you improve.

If that's what you like, then send me a message or post in here. One thing at a time. If I happen to review something other than the work you requested I most likely didn't make a mistake, but am preparing to do the one you asked (this means I'm getting a feel for who you are or have done; don't expect it though).

IF, I owe you a review or have said I'd do one in the past, and by gosh, have never done it, remind me here. Please, I don't like to be a jerk like that.

Lookee here, you're already in high demand

If you have the time-- it's a poem, and to just warn you, it's a wee bit long. Thanks!

Duly noted both of you. I will message you when I have finished the reviews or am in the process of doing so.

Buscador review is finished. Persephonia's will be done today.

Poem has been reviewed for Persephonia. Any and all comers, I am happy to serve.

Anyone who has been reviewed by me is welcome to ask questions, debate, or have me look at new drafts. Just give me links!

Oh Gosh I'm lame. I am now two-thirds of the people here.
Please don't hate me.
Anyways. I have this crazy little piece right here and I'm not entirely sure what to do with it.
I was hoping that's where you could come in.
However, if you don't feel like it, s'all good.
Thanks either way. c:

Have fun with this. :P

Persephonia & Kyllorac reviews taken into account, will get to them shortly.

Perse review done, Kyllorac next.

This is closed as of now. I will re-open it in the future.

Kyllorac review is finished. Ready for newcomers, the review stop is back open.

Hey there. Here is a link to my new short story titled Sinews. I'd greatly appreciate a review. Thanks =] topic79478.html

Hey I wrote this short story. It'd be awesome if you'd review it. Heres the link!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post850247.html#p850247

Will you review my poem? post850763.html#p850763