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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:12 pm
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ehte92 says...



Hello there, Isha. :pirate3:

Could you please review these poems for me?

topic79077.html
topic78214.html
topic79212.html

Take your time. :smt003
Thank you. :D
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:00 pm
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Skorpionne says...



I have something I need reviewing, but it's not on YWS. Mind if I PM it to you?
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:15 pm
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eldEr says...



Umm... I don't mind, but I'm not promising I'll get to it straight, straight away. xD I have a few things I need to do, so the next two or three days are going to be hectic - starting tonight. (PM it to me or post it on YWS, either one works. I prefer the latter, but meh.)
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Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:46 pm
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eldEr says...



All of those are done except for the last one - which I'm still waiting for.
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Sun Apr 17, 2011 2:52 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Long time, no review, heh? Bad! LOL. But could you review a new project for me?

Here you go--Call Me Mr. Ailuro

`Shrubs

Thanks in advance.
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:05 pm
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eldEr says...



Done. ^^
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:43 pm
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niteowl says...



Could you review this poem for me please?
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:57 am
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eldEr says...



Finished!
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Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:48 am
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cupcake says...



If you have time, could you please review my poem. Here's the link:
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Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:02 pm
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Elinor says...



Can you look at this short story for me? Thanks so much!

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:41 am
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eldEr says...



Both are done. ^^
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:31 pm
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pinkangel54123 says...



Could you review the first chapter of my Fantasy novel? It's called The Concord, and I really need some help with it. Thanks in advanced!
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:58 pm
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Caduceus says...



HII! :)

Pleasssseee review this for me, okaaaY? topic79904.html


Thanks you soo much! :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003 :smt003
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 8:23 pm
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UnicornNerd says...



Please read my novel, the shift. It science fiction. You can find it on my portfolio. Kthnxbai! :)
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:42 pm
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eldEr says...



Finished!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  








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