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Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:55 pm
IcyFlame says...



I feel bad for constantly posting on here :(
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Tue May 24, 2011 1:38 pm
Spitfire says...



Finished everything a while ago..

Anyone want a review? 8)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
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Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:25 pm
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Please can you review this for me?
I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'.
The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes.
Lofty >.<
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Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:46 pm
Rascalover says...



I need a review please

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It's romantic fiction.
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