I think you should let me review your work. :)

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 9:07 pm

parigirle says...

There's really nothing for me to submit right now, but I recently discovered a love for critiquing, not least of all because I know that critiques can be story-saving sometimes. And um, I've done it... but I'm kind of scared of reviewing randomly. In case someone bites my head off.

I try to give pretty indepth reviews (look at the examples at the bottom). I'm online a lot so you'll get your review quickly, but I do spend a good amount of time (at least 30min --- 45min usually) on each review.

What I will happily review:
Fantasy fiction
General fiction
Romantic fiction
Action/adventure fiction

What I'll review, but not a big fan:
Historical Fiction
Horror
Science Fiction

What I will not review:
Fan-fiction of any sort
Non-fiction
Art/photography (No experience here!)
Poetry (I can not write poetry for my life, I don't think I'd be much help.)

I'll do short stories or novels. I'm willing to read as many chapters as you'd like, just specify whether you want an overall critique (which will be very generalized if you have a lot of chapters), a critique on each chapter, or a detailed critique on a specific chapter. And warn me if it's really long.

My writing:
topic74327.html

Examples of my reviews:
post808272.html#p808272
post807949.html#p807949
post805005.html#p805005

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:58 am

ErBear says...

Hello!

I'm 85% sure you already did a review for me, and if you did, I added some new details and such.

If not, could you please review this? XD

viewtopic.php?t=73950

THANKS MUCH!

~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:03 pm

parigirle says...

Taylor - done

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Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:26 pm

ErBear says...

Hey! Thanks for the review!

Can I request one more?

post787415.html#p787415

Thanks!!!

Taylor

~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.

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Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:54 pm

parigirle says...

Sorry, I was busy yesterday - I'll get on that right now(:

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:07 pm

LadySpark says...

Hi Pari, can you review my new novel?
novel.php?id=1026

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Thu Jan 20, 2011 3:13 pm

MiaParamore says...

Hey there, Pari. Would you mind reviewing Turning the Tables(1.1)

Hope you enjoy it.

"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:40 pm

parigirle says...

To both of you - sorry I'm late, exams are in a few days and there was the winter formal and all that busy stuff. I'll try to do the reviews as fast as I can!