Young Writers Society

I can only review 15 right now, but will be able to do more later. The first ten that gets posted will be the first to get reviewed.

I will not:
Check your grammar and correct it. Why? I think you should check your own grammar. Anyway I would end up telling you something that is probably incorrect.
Write long reviews. You should expect 1-3 paragraphs, depending on the quality of the work.
Review unreadable works.

I will:
Be critical. I wont ease up, but I won't be mean. There's a difference between being honest and plain out mean.
Tell you how strong your characters are and aren't.
Tell you about your plot and your voice.
Review the first three chapters to your novel. If I like it, i will continue.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 have a great review

Done . Next!

I still need to reveiw 14 more.

C'mon guys. I haven't reveiwed much yet .

Could you please review a scene or two from my novella? It would be much appreciated.

novel.php?id=461

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post740898.html#p740898 please

Reveied yours Emalily. Great poem. I also did yours Prosithion.Lei è stato perfetto!

dude, awesome crit! *bows* Thank you so much.

I forgot im supposed to do scene two.... Srry i'l get right to it>

I was wondering if you could take a look at the prologue and first chapter in my novel?
Here are the links:

Prologue

Chapter 1

Many thanks in advance!

Would you review my poem? topic67459.html

Done. Were open again.

Heya, wanna review my new work (Wish it Was a) Fairytale? Pleeaaaaaaaase?

Thanks!
Alzora

Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could review a few parts of my novel in historical fiction called 'softness of doves'. Could you start with the prologue, please? Thank-you so much! I look forward to your review (s)!
~ Alia