Done and Done Jassy! (I hope I can call you that?) So anyway, who is up next! Haven't you noticed, I'm checking this more frequently now!!!!!! So do not be afraid to ask, I'm here to help!
Would you review this? I wrote this a long back and then left it halfway. So I'm planning to work out on it. A review would be helpful. Seems like Eternity {ch-1}
Thanks~! ~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Done and Done. Now, who wants one of my awesome and really cool reviews! No one? Well then-I'll just have to go...and...and sit in my corner and CRY!
But literally! Who wants a review? Don't make me get my cronies on you! Oh, that's it...you better watch out, he's coming after you. Yes, yes! He may look like a pink elephant, but don't be fooled. For he is a dancing pink elephant, who can dance his way to others demise!!! Mwuhahahahaha
If it isn't too much to ask, would you mind reviewing what I have posted of my novel The Fox and the Prince? If that's too much, a review on the first half of Chapter 3 would be lovely. :D
It is romance but it's only close to 700 words long and really not all that romantic so I hope that won't turn you away.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
@PinkAngel; I cannot review all of them, because I'm slightly stretched for time this evening. So I will do the last chapter you have posted and try my best to pick up on stuff. Sorry, if that isn't what you wanted.
@ Kyllorac; I'm on the case!
@Lillymorre; No problem, I'll still do it for you.
I know the concept is weird but it's ok!!! I hope... And if you haven't clawed your eyes out by the end of chapter one could you probably do chapter two? Please?
“Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering.”
I'll be right on it. Wookie I've done your review and Shubi for some reason I cannot post a reply to yours. It's probably my old, slack and stupid computer because I can do it for everything else. I'm terribly sorry, my computer is just being a butt head. If you'd like I can pm you a review?
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
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