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Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:30 pm
ultraviolet says...



Hey, can you review [September Contest] It's What I Do? Please and Thank you!
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Wed Sep 15, 2010 7:50 pm
Shearwater says...



UltraViolet-Done!

I'm free for more! :D
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Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:11 pm
Sins says...



Howdy, Pink. 8)

Could you be extremely kind and review my novel for me... It's kind of long, but I'm hoping you won't mind too much. It's called A Shot of Arrogance and it's in the Romantic novels forum.

novel.php?id=510 - Here's the link.

I've just edited the beginning of it quite a bit and would love for an opinion on the newish version. It has eight chapters altogether so far. I know it's quite a lot, but I will be perfectly happy to review a novel of yours in return. I'll probably do that anyway... I'd feel guilty otherwise. :lol:

Thanks so much!
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Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:21 pm
Shearwater says...



No problem, I'll get to it!
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Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:02 pm
Lynlyn says...



Hi Pink,

I hear you're a reviewin' machine! Would you mind taking a look at topic69605.html? I would really super duper appreciate it.
"Better keep yourself clean and bright; you are the window through which you must see the world." - G. B. Shaw
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Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:06 pm
Shearwater says...



Lynlyn-Done.

Chugga-Chugga-choo-choo :)
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 12:56 am
Wariofart says...



Hola! Can you review my short story? It's for the September contest, and I'd love your opinion on it:

The Artist
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That my love keeps writing again and again
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:49 am
Shearwater says...



Wariofart-Done!
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:56 am
Roal says...



Hey there Pink! If you could please be kind enough to make an opinion on E's Diary thanks :]
It's a fantasy novel. I just started on it so it would really help if you give me your opinion x]
14 years have passed
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:52 pm
seeminglymeaningless says...



lol hey Pink :) Could I ask for a review of my entry for the September Contest, SNAFU? It doesn't have any reviews yet :(

If you're too busy, don't worry about it :3

- Jai
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:17 pm
Shearwater says...



Roal-Done!
Jai-Done!
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:28 pm
Kiwisatsuma says...



Hey! :)

Would you be able to review my September Contest entry? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69678.html

Please don't feel you have to review it by tonight, any time is awesome. :D

Thankyou!
  





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Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:30 pm
Shearwater says...



Kiwisatsuma-Done!
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Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:52 am
GirlInTheMirror says...



HI! Will you pretty, pretty, pretty, please review my short story wicked: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69673.html or my poem Poor Mr. Diggs: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69695.html for the contest. Thank you for considering it! If you don't have time to do it tonight or can't do both, I promise I won't send evil penguins to slap you in your sleep. I won't even be mad at all. :smt001
  





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Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:20 pm
Shearwater says...



GirlInTheMirror-Done!

Sorry I didn't have time to review your poem last night, I fell asleep :(
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Wicked people never have time for reading. It's one of the reasons for their wickedness.
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