Young Writers Society

Alright, done, done, done, and working on Vast's three.

Keep 'em coming people!!

Could you review this please?

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It's part one of a short story.

Hey I'm looking for a few more reviews on my prologue before I post the first chapter. It's a long prologue, so if you have a look at it and baulk at the size and run away screaming, that's fine It also has plenty of very good, extremely good reviews already, but I'm looking for another person I can bounce ideas off of, seeing as my story tends to develop further and further as more and more people point out mistakes and I'm able to hone the story into fine shape.

Reprisal - A Very Long Prologue

Thanks in advance, 007/Hope... if that is your real name *smiles*

I'd be happy to return the favour of a review on any of your works, if you'd like.

- Jai

Sorry guys I didn't realize I had requests xD

Anyway closed for now, I got a lot of school, but if you'd still like a review please feel free to ask, although it might be a while.

Ohai, guess who's taking reviews again! >:D

Ooh, could you review this?

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Thanks

~Jas

I totally forgot to say I finished it xD

Action/adventure fiction. There are three chapters. Read one if you want, I just need opinions.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=667

Aaand again I did this a long time ago and forgot to post in here xD

So I've kinda been slacking on reviewing, let's change that shall we?

Go ahead, I dare you to link me to your stuff. DOO ETT.

Yooooooooooooooo, Hope.

Would you be ever so kind and review a short story of mine? It's for a contest, so I need to get it half decent, and at the moment, me no likey...

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Please and thank you!

Okay I got one for you it's another short fantasy story thats going in my novel of short stories.

~Check it out! A link~

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Thanks

Hey, I'd have a chapter to review if you can. You don't necessarily have to read the whole thing to review the plot, just grammar and style would be great

It's under romantic novels, Golden Wings: [url]topic70786.html[/url]

And I'm willing to trade if you need something for me to review
Thank you!

-Truth-

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Do it, you know you want to
~peanut~

Skins= done
Riv's might take a bit because it looks long, and I'll look at the rest soon soon.