*runs up to Evi*
Evi, darling! I just wrote my first free verse and my longest poem ever. Help.
I didn't pay attention to the rhythm schemes or anything. I want to turn the story-ish poem into a poem-ish story, if you get what I'm saying! No, wait. Flip that. Haha.
So I need you, Evi, to put on your superhero reviewer cape, swoosh in, and edit the heck out of my piece! Haha.
Here's the link: topic45037.html
Thanks!
Love,
Music.
(And if you want anything reviewed, swing by my thread! I'd be happy to help!)
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