Young Writers Society

If you're up for a laugh I could do with some feedback on this:
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Cheers.

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Sorry I was gone for so long, but Im back and will be so happy for some stuff to review

So whos next??

Hey there

Could you please review my fantasy fiction? Don't worry, there are no vampires or werewolves e.t.c. It's kind of a mix between fantasy fiction and realistic fiction.
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Thanks in advance,

xoxo Skins

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Whose next???

Hey can you review this? I know its long but I need reviews. So read some part and review for others. As you wish. Won't mind if you turn my piece down.
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)

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Whose next ???

Thanks for the reviews dear. This is what I would like you to review next. Please!!!

A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3

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any one????

Hey there RascalLover. I must say that your avatar is so cool and pretty. Really!

Can you review est of the chapter of my novel-A Criminal's Heart? Just do 4 and 5 now, if its okay. the link is down on my signature. Thanks a lot!

~Shubhi

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Anyone else need a review?!

Hey there. Here asking for reviews.Fancy reviewing this?Love has no boundaries I would review for you if you like.

~Shubhi

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Anyone else need a review

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