Young Writers Society

Black Ghost, at your services!

I'm trying to get my review count up as much as possible, so I'll be happy to critique your works. ^_^

THINGS I CRITIQUE:

-Other fiction
-Sci/fi Fiction
-Action/Adventure Fiction
-Fantasy Fiction

TYPES:

I'll often critique many aspects of your story, including:

-Plot
-Characters
-Grammar, punctuation
-Overall flow of story

If you want me to comment on something specific, be sure to tell me when you post your link. Otherwise, I'll just critique normally.

PROCEDURE:

I like to have things organized, so please include the title, genre, and wordcount, and specific comments if you have them. Also note that I don't do mulitple chapters.

It takes me a fair bit to critique well, so while I can't just rattle them off as you post links, know that when I do post your critique, it will be a meaningful and quality review of your work.

I'm not asking for anything concrete in return, but if anyone ever wants to PM feedback, I'll be glad to take it. ^_^

BlackGhost

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Completed:

"The Loser" by Kalliope
"All There Is" by JFW1415
"Murder She Drew" by scasha

Hey,

I'd be really glad if you could take a look at The Loser (Other Fiction)

I'd be glad if you could give me a general overview on it. There's only the first part posted at the moment, so it shouldn't be too much work.

Thank you so much, in advance!

Done ^_^

Anyone else?

[s]BlackGhost[/s]

All There Is
Other Fiction
Line by line.
1,792 words.

Thank you so much! Let me know when I can return the favor.

~JFW1415

Finished! Hope it helped.

Next?

[s]BlackGhost[/s]

Hey can you take a look at Murder She Drew?
Genre = Mystery (I put it in the Action/Adventure forum)
Word Count = 4,000 words
Type: Line Edits

Thanks!

Finished! Sorry it took a little while. ^^

[s]BlackGhost[/s]

Ooh, mai turn?

Action Adventure! First Part of Chapter One!

Thank you, mucho.

-Presented with a boo-berry muffin.-

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