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Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:48 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



Ok this is a post your needing to critques or your wanting a good story offer.

Ether say what's a good story and post a link or post a link and say you want critques.

I my self have had my fair share of hard times so...ya.

There you go.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat May 10, 2008 1:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Emerson says...



*moved to Will Review for Food*


You may also consider using proper grammar and spelling in your post. If you're offering to critique, it's probably best to look like you know how to write.
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Wed Apr 30, 2008 12:27 am
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I have a poem thats need more reviewing: topic29375.html
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Fri May 09, 2008 12:46 am
myfreindsavamp says...



Thanks Suzzan I finally founded in thanks to you.

I reveiwed it. Verylong but great job.
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Thu May 15, 2008 9:13 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



I'm soo hungry! Feed me! :smt117
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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
  





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Thu May 15, 2008 9:19 pm
Rydia says...



I wouldn't mind another review on Sirens' Symphony seen as you appear to be so desperate ;)
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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