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Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:50 am
Rydia says...



Both done :) More food?
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:42 pm
brainychic212 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60029.html

I need help with this one. It's very important to me. :)

Thanks in advance!
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-Pride and Prejudice

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Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:36 pm
MiaParamore says...



Can you review both of these?
They are different stories. you take your time. Thanks in advance.
Seems like Eternity
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:18 pm
Hannah says...



-is mesmerized by your pretty row of badges-

Would you mind helping me try to pinpoint the discomfort everyone feels with the sailor's thoughts in this poem?

topic60513.html

And anything else that you wold suggest would be lovely, thanks! :D
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
are you a green room knight yet?
have you read this week's Squills?
  





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Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:33 pm
eldEr says...



If you have the time, I'd really appreciate it if you reviewed this.

post677451.html#p677451

I just edited it and added a bit onto the end of the chapter. I really hope you like it! The second chapter is coming late tomorrow afternoon. If you want a link to that too, you can PM me.
Thanks!! :elephant:
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:39 pm
Rydia says...



Both on my list, I'll look for the second chapter when I'm ready too. While I work on these, I'll temporarily not be taking more requests but if you don't mind waiting you're free to post the links :)
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:41 pm
BenFranks says...



Bit'a poetry Kitty for you! It's the edited version so hopefully there won't be too much nitpicking, :) but I'd value your thoughts on it:
viewtopic.php?t=60591 - It's called "Yours Truly" :D

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Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:05 am
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All done :)
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:52 am
Sura says...



Here's a poem! I'd love a crit. :3
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:52 am
Sins says...



Hey Kitty :)

Not sure if you like doing Art and Photography, but could you review my photo please?

topic60790.html

Thanks :wink:
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:16 pm
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Lava says...



Kitty!

Well, I hope you can review (and I like like harsh, honest ones.) this for me:
post680303.html

Thanks,
~Lava
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Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:37 am
Maddy says...



Hey Kitty,
Mind dabbling in fan-fiction? I know what you are thinking- trust me, it's not hard to follow.
topic60873.html
(By the way, it's based on Goosebumps. :) )
Thanks,
-Mad
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)
  





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Sat Apr 03, 2010 6:42 pm
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Alright, three down and one to go. I'll hopefully get around to your tonight, Maddy. If not then expect it tomorrow at the latest ^^
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:41 pm
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Mr.Knightley says...



Hi Kitty! I was wondering if you would review my short story. I posted it a while back, but didn't get the feedback I was hoping for. Someone just bumped it, though, so I figured now was my chance to ask (and you do such awesome reviews ;) ).

topic55117.html

Thanks, if you do! Please tell me about anything you don't like about it. If it's corny, boring, or just plain dumb, I want to know! :D
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:58 am
Firearris says...



Hey, Heather!

Would you be willing to do my essay, by any chance?

post685378.html#p685378

Thanks. ^.^
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  








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