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Young Writers Society


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Points: 1058
Reviews: 17
Sun Feb 11, 2024 1:40 am
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humblebard1 says...



The bard returns!
Tell me if there's anything I need to know about your work, if you want me to review it in a certain way or focusing on specific elements, and give me a link to it! I shouldn't take more than two days to finish a review, and if I do I will let you know in advance. Please include (if needed, and you don't want a bog standard review) your song request too! Any of these can be slightly tweaked if you wish :D


Ballad: a longer review, which will include some extra topics you can specify

Ditty: a short and sweet review that gets to the point

Your Song: a fully customised review; you can specify anything down from the length to the structure I use, just remember to let me know of everything you want, so I don't forget anything

Lute Opera: better for longer pieces; the FULL package. The bard shall rant as long as he needs to, in this case.

Brisk Biography: the song to pick if you want advice/ overviews of your characters

Vicious Mockery: if you want as much constructive criticism as possible, this might be your bag. I doubt you'll take 1d6 psychic damage, either :D

Musical: a set multiple reviews (no more than three at a time, please) can be stacked with other song requests



I will review anything you need, from novel first drafts to sonnets; if you have any more questions, you can find me by the hearth strumming my lute, so feel free to ask.
Cheers, people of YWS!
  








I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom