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Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:47 am
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Mikatsune says...



Please do read my short story: (The AI War)

Title: The AI War

Genre: Science fiction, Tech


Intro: It's about a boy called Kai who goes to history lesson and learns some things he didn't want to know.



I'm sorry, I'm not good at Intros.
  





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Mon Feb 06, 2023 5:53 am
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KocoCoko says...



Hiya there! I'm a baby member basically haha, so um, here' s the first chapter to a little project I plan on writing.

- Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941.

- Supernatural, slight mystery, sort of a dark comedy, and also slice of life/found family(??)

- Wakefield, Wyoming is a strange town, and Frank Williamson and his new housekeeper, Lucinda, might just be a bit stranger.

- https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/KocoCoko/Wakefield-Wyoming-1941-154789

- Anything in particular that you want me to make note of:
-- Violence and/or Horror. Nothing crazy, but it gets a bit bloody.

-- I'd really love any comments about the characters, since they're the driving force of the story and the narrative is more focused on the people and relationships than some of the events going on (dont worry, those are still important, though.)
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You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling