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Of Wizardy and Witchcraft



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Tue Aug 27, 2019 6:48 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey, I'm back! I'm trying to be active again, so here I am, offering reviews for you guys.

This time, I would accept 1 request a time. The way this works is that as long as the first request has not been completed yet, no other request would be accepted.

At a time, I accept:

1 first-chapter novel request
1 short story request
1 poem request

If I haven't finished my short story request, another short story request will not be accepted. Same goes short story and poem. Also, I retain the right to reject a request without giving any reason, or to not apply the rules I have made.

Without further ado, do request!

Added rules: Novel chapter that is more than 3k words will not be entertained.
Last edited by Lightsong on Tue Sep 03, 2019 1:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Aug 28, 2019 5:05 pm
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keystrings says...



Could I please request a review on Faint Etches?

Rated 18+ for language and violence.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:59 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 3:08 pm
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Lightsong says...



@fraey: Request accepted! It would take a while before I do it, though. No promise!

@wetumbrella6: Request rejected. Check the first post to know why. Also, the chapter is too long. I suggest to shorten it to 3k.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Tue Sep 03, 2019 1:25 am
Lightsong says...



1 temporary slot open for novel chapter of any number review request.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  








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