Hello there! It would mean a lot to me if you could review my work "The Ocean Is Not An Ocean" (Part 1)!! It is only around 3k long thank you so much )
Hey! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going." -Abigail Docherty
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