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Wed May 01, 2019 7:15 am
GirlWithATypewriter says...



Hi Manilla, I posted a poem called Love Conquers.
Can you please review it? Thank you!
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Mon May 27, 2019 9:11 am
felistia says...



Hi manilla

Could you review my Quest for Fire novel?

Title: The Quest for Fire

Link: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

Description: It's a story with dragons as the main characters.

Spoiler! :
The story revolves around one tribe of dragons trying to find a way out of their homeland (a volcano has erupted laying waste to the land). The find a suitable home after three years of searching the whole continent of Megalonia. The island is filled with vegetation and animals and seems to be uninhabited by any native dragon tribes.


Notes: I've written seven chapters so far and I'm looking for someone to review each chapter in the novel and focus mainly on plot and character based criticism.

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Mon May 27, 2019 6:17 pm
manilla says...



@GirlWithATypewriter

Finished! Sorry if it's a little late.
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Mon Jun 03, 2019 9:54 pm
manilla says...



New rules for the box and they apply from now on!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:08 am
Saichi says...



Link to Piece: The Origin: Prologue
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's a novel
Age rating: 12+
Any other comments (Optional):Would be a great help! Thank you so much!
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:59 am
manilla says...



The link doesn't work. Could you try the one to the published piece and not the draft?
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Jun 13, 2019 1:10 am
Elinor says...



Link to Piece: Little Turtledove (1)
Type of Piece: Short Story
Age rating: 16+
Any other comments (Optional): This is the first of 3 parts, feel free to check out if you so desire. The rating is more for the themes rather than anything you actually see in the script. Would love to hear your thoughts!

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