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Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:11 pm
Lavvie says...



Lavvie's Loving Reviews


Before requesting a review, please read the guidelines below.


WHAT I LOVE TO REVIEW



• Any rating
• Short stories
• Chapters
• Essays and related things
• Any genre, but I do love me some romance


HOW TO REQUEST A REVIEW



Please post a link to your work so that I can review it. Please do not ask me to focus on something particular, because I like to review holistically.
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Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:33 pm
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*cough cough*

I know some of these already have several reviews, but if you don't mind that...

The Chosen Grandma
Fantasy/humor, exactly what it sounds like.
Rated E except for a few instances of a 12+ rating due to one minor swear.
Installments generally ~1500 words and posted weekly.

(I linked you to the folder in my portfolio because it starts with a prologue and I dunno if you care for prologues or would rather skip it. Whatever you prefer.)

(P.S. If you do mind that it already has several reviews on the earlier chapters, never mind and thank you anyway.)
  





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Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:35 pm
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@BlueAfrica - This will be a fun project for me and I'm looking forward to starting on it! I've heard some great things about this novel of yours ;)


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Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:51 pm
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Splendid and thank you :D And please do let me know if there's anything you'd like reviewed! (Although fiction is best in that case; my poetry-reviewing skills are awfully rusty.)
  





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Sat Aug 12, 2017 11:39 am
Lightsong says...



Hey, I would like it if you review the fifth part of my long short story, but if you want to read/review from the first one, feel welcomed to do so! God's Assassin is the story I'm referring, please and thank you! :D
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Sun Aug 13, 2017 3:29 am
Aaraju says...



Hello! Could you please review my poem? Here's the link
That Night
  





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Sun Aug 13, 2017 3:55 am
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@Aaraju - done!


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Sun Aug 13, 2017 4:03 am
mephistophelesangel says...



Hi! Could you please review my new short story?

rainbow splatters on the walls - 1/2
  





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Sun Aug 13, 2017 4:20 am
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@mephistophelesangel - great work! Let me know when part two is available.


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Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:46 am
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Hey, part two for "rainbow splatters on the walls" is now up! Thought you'd like to know :)

rainbow splatters on the walls - 2/2
  





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Mon Aug 14, 2017 2:19 pm
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@mephistophelesangel - on it!


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Wed Aug 16, 2017 9:19 pm
Sheadun says...



HI!!

I would absolutely love if you would please review my novel. This is the link to the first part of chapter 1 :https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=137025#c627203

It is fantasy, but it will have some romance in the future :wink: \

Thanks!

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Thu Aug 17, 2017 2:58 pm
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@Sheadun - I've finished the review! Keep me posted for future chapters :)


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Sun Aug 20, 2017 11:09 pm
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@Lightsong - I finally got through God's Assassin! Thanks for your patience. :D


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Mon Aug 21, 2017 8:24 am
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Thanks for the reviews! They're awesome and I'd definitely take them into account for future drafts. In the meantime, I wish you to review Dancer of the Fire Blade, a novel I've recently started. Please and thank you! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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