Young Writers Society

Hi there. I'm new to the YWS and I haven't had much reviews yet . I would so much appreciate it if you would review my first story
The Epping Forest

I need as much criticism as possible on my first work before I post my second.

Thank you very much for your time and advice

Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Recovery I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is today so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx

Hello! Please review my work. This creative non-fiction and I'm hoping to pass it on our school's creative writing workshop. Thank you so much.

Head bang

Could you review my novel "Shattered Crowns"? There are eight chapters so far, plus my spoiler-ridden synopsis.

"Shattered Crowns" in depth synopsis

The Carpenter - Exordium of Shattered Crowns

Sally - Chapter One of Shattered Crowns

Wylfred - Chapter Two of Shattered Crowns

The Duchess - Chapter Three of Shattered Crowns

The King of Winter - Chapter Four of Shattered Crowns

Daegar - Chapter Five of Shattered Crowns

The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns

Son of the Black - Chapter Seven of Shattered Crowns

Note: My chapters are relatively long, so be warned.